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The aspects of truth in the fiction,
Many befriend us only when they want something from us, so,
If true help is not forthcoming from the users and abusers,
Let these words instead convey my thoughtforms on streams of data,
To the world at large.

I know fire when I feel it.
I know desire when I see it.
Surrounding circumstances are nothing but illusory distractions.

All time and all space,
Exist at once, in one place.

I still know what I once knew, and what I will know.
And it doesn't even matter how mad we all are!

As above, so below.
As then, so now.
As there, so here.

Two ablaze, two aglow, encircled!
Tiny orbs of light crackle, and the darkness shines the most.
One watching, watches, uncertain what is seen,
Many watch/ed, uncertain what they see, they saw,
They see- they saw. They see/saw.

But on a deeper level, all was known to all.
This is the way,
To the truth, and my life.

Time is just a tool we use to make sense,
Of this sea of energies always existing, and always have and always will.

All is known, this is the way,
To the truth and my life.

Everywhere it is.
Everything it is.
Everyone it is.
Everywhen it is.

All is known, this is the way.

I have been everywhere,
Even where you are.

That, who is inside my room inside me,
though also clearly elsewhere...

This, who is floating around a dream,
of waking consciousness...

Who are dreaming,
Who are waking,
Who are you,
Who are me,
Who are us,
Who are they.

Who are...
Who just are.

As above around inside entwined enshrined between within the strands.
As entangled bound between beyond within.

He comes the night it shines and becomes that which surrounds us.
As entangled bound between beyond within.

It lives within he me and we can't stop nobody can deny it.
As entangled bound between beyond within.

See, the reality is, the reality is the fantasy, and the fantasy is the reality.
And the truth will never die.
Life is theatre, life is art, and games we play are serious business.
And the truth will never die.

We ARE all mad here,
And this madness is the WAY,
to guide you- this truth- to my life.
Never get lost again unless we want to...

Again I said, critique, yes, but be kind, understand...

The feelings are utmost- the words only hope to convey these truths.

The description is poetry too.

We love we live we laugh we cry we wander off the path alone and try to find our way back...

Where...

When...

Who...

You are me, and
I am you.
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:iconjsamlovessockmonkeys:
I think that this is amazing. It's very in depth and expresses strong emotion and feeling that a reader could relate too while going through any emotion. I think you did a fabulous job. My favorite line in the poem is, "All time and all space,
Exist at once, in one place." This is my favorite because my religious beliefs come in to play here. It's a very well written poem, and I just want to let you know that this is phenomenal writing. As my beliefs come in, I can definitely relate to the "narrator" of this poem, and it's also a great explanation of the world we live in, if you take the time to look beyond what we think we see.
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belavrana Nov 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you for the comment, too!
I don't even get that many comments.
And that makes me sad sometimes, so I'm so glad you commented as well as faved.
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belavrana Nov 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
So, first I made a new comment instead of replying. I am not surprised though!
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isaacvc Nov 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
awesome!
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belavrana Nov 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you for the comment, too!
I don't even get that many comments.
And that makes me sad sometimes, so I'm so glad you commented as well as faved.
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